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Story Openings

  • by James Lewis
  • 18 Nov, 2019

Ammar's Pizza Surprise

LO: To write a story opening for your version of the Handa's Surprise story.

Have you ever felt hungry all the time?  Ammar was a very hungry boy with a very large tummy; he was as hungry as a lion who had not eaten for a month!  The story begins in the family kitchen where his dad made all the meals.  Ammar and his sisters loved to munch Chinese food, especially noodles and crispy duck.  Ammar however had a considerable liking for pizza.  Square pizza, round pizza, triangular pizza, even pentagon shaped pizza.  Ammar liked nothing more than to eat pizza on the sofa playing computer games.    

It had been a long week at school, Ammar decided that he would surprise his best friend Shazia with a special tasty treat.  What kind of sweet-smelling food would he choose?  Ammar decided to put 7 kinds of pizza in his Deliverdoo delivery bag and cycled to his best friends’ house.  I wonder which pizza Shazia will like the best?  


 Fill in the gaps with your story information                                                                                                               

                                                                                                                      ………………Surprise…………

 

Have you ever felt hungry all the time?

……………. was a very hungry ………….with a very large tummy; he was as hungry as a …………. who had not eaten for a ……….! The story begins in the …………… where …………..made all the meals. …………. and his …………… loved ……………………., especially ……………and ……………   .      ………………however had a considerable liking for ………... Square pizza, round pizza, triangular pizza, even pentagon shaped pizza. ……………….liked nothing more than to …………on the ………playing computer games.

It had been a long week at school, ……….. decided that he would surprise his best friend ………… with a special tasty treat. What kind of ………………..would he choose? …………decided to put 7 kinds of …………. in his Deliverdoo delivery bag and ………………cycled to his best friends’ house. I wonder which ……………   …………will like the best?  

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