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Extended Writing

  • by James Lewis
  • 22 Nov, 2019

Ammar's Pizza Surprise

LO: To write your own story using your notes, adding Y5/Y6 words and interesting adjectives. 

Marking today:

Use more than four paragraphs - 1 mark   

Use direct speech "  " - 1 mark                 

Use punctuation  ? ! ;  ( ) ,  .  1 mark                                  

Use a question to start your story - 1 mark                                        

Use interesting words other than ....said... describing direct speech - 1 mark                

Write neatly - 1 mark                                                           

Join your handwriting - 1 mark                         

Write 2 sides of A4 paper - 1 mark                         

Use capital and lower case letters in the correct places - 1 mark      

Finger spaces in between words to improve your presentation - 1 mark           

Underline your date and title with a ruler - 1 Mark                                       

Write an interesting story with a start, middle and end - 1 mark

I will be marking your work out of 12 today - the best work will be going on the wall display!

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